I haven't reviewed an animation in like a year. But this was just so great I had to. This deserves a spot in at least the top 10 for a long long time.
Excellent job, gobi.
Newgrounds needs more things like this. Not necessarily stick randomness, but animations that really have alot of shown effort put into them and animations that we can REALLY appretiate the work that goes into it.
Good job guys :)
I REALLY don't think this deserves a freakin 4.24 though. Thats like top 50. You have to admit theres more than 50 flashes on here that are better than this :\. Really. I honestly think this should get around 3.80 maybe.
Anyways. It was pretty good and interesting. Try to make the tricks and physics a little more realistic. He can still do the same things but just the animation of him doing it is a little..bleh. You should practice drawing on paper too, that will help alot.
Good job anyways. Keep it up.
Well, whatever. I am actually quite good on paper already, it's the using a mouse that gets me. Although if you watch my previous work, this is really that much better I think.
eh...at least you tried. Just keep..practicing.
(and wait a while before you submit anyhting else..)
First thing that deserves its 4+ score in a while
This was REALLY good. (but I'm sure you know that.) It's a great big step of from youre last flash. Graphics are almost perfect, animation is great, you put it together really great. And I LOVE that text effect you did.
REALLY great job. Can't wait till the actual thing comes out. Could you give an expected date for it?
And if you don't mind would you mind emailing me exlplaining how you did that effect? I think I mightve seen a tutorial for it somewhere...I dunno.
Anyways exellent job!
but this REALLY doesnt deserve the 4.00 score. It doesnt have the production qualities that a 4.0 scoring flash should have.
and yeah, at first it looked like a typical, stereotypical-anime-copy kind of flash. But as it got going, it was pretty good.
It was still lacking some things though. Just keep it up, and next time add some color. If not color.......then at least just do SOMETHING to make the graphics look more appealing.
wasnt too good.
There wasnt much actual animation in this movie. The drawings were alright but I think everything could have been presented a little better too. Some of the graphics were kind of..eh..they looked a little effort-lacking. For example that castle 2-D was standing on..
Next time, try to make them move..better..animation-wise.
that was nice.
It had a really mellow feeling to it. I liked it. Music fit well. It was easy-watching :D
Only problem is that it ends too suddenly. Its just like BOOMend and it disrupts that mellow feeling a little. That was kinda dissapointing actually.
I hope to see more from you soon :)
I can see potential in this flash..but you seem to be missing some basic stuff. The big things I saw wrong about this were:
1. timing was REALLY bad. The guy stared at her for at least 30 seconds. I thought my computer was lagging or something.
2. animation could be better. Some parts in it show me that you can do alot better. Lay off the fades and (what seems like) lazy skipping..ish..stuff. If thats a style, I suggest you try out a different one.
3. The characters couldve been introduced a little better. The main problem I had was with the last dude. "go for her" we have no clue who this person is(i thought it was the principal? o_O) or how he knows whats going on with the kids life.
Well just work on those things..you should be fine. Try to make the next episode more interesting. I'll be looking forward to it.
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